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I broke her at noon.
It was one of those fall days where it's still warm, but the smell of autumn tingles your brain as it seeps in your nose unseen. Her apartment on Hollywood Boulevard could be mine if I wanted it, but it all seemed to be too much for too little: a tight space for a big name. And while I'd had fun with the game, it was over.
We'd played for months. She would never call me back, and then when all seemed lost she would call in the frantic need to talk to me. To talk to me about them. And that's what I swam in when she pulled me into her pool of porcelain ghosts of men who I knew nothing about; I swam in their clinky, creepy aftermath. She was in pieces, and I was dancing between the delicacy of these easily shattered icons she erected in her memory of them.
Last night, when she called, I would not come.
Later last night, when she called, I would not come.
After midnight, when she called begging, I came.
I would not listen to her sorrows sung of the next in the line of lovers whose intentions were to merely spin her and tip her and roll her around in a waiting game to see if she would bounce or break when they let her go.
I would not polish her delicate edges, let seep her condensing grief on my hands or protect her with wrappings of paper and cotton.
By daybreak, she was begging to let me once again take what she wanted emptied from her center, so that she may be free to be burned again, filled by their vital fluids and steaming temptation.
By ten, I made my intentions clear. I was to be next in the line: to spin, to tip, to roll, to pour myself and watch her go.
By eleven, she relented.
I broke her at noon.
It was one of those fall days where it's still warm, but the smell of autumn tingles your brain as it seeps in your nose unseen. Her apartment on Hollywood Boulevard could be mine if I wanted it, but it all seemed to be too much for too little: a tight space for a big name. And while I'd had fun with the game, it was over.
We'd played for months. She would never call me back, and then when all seemed lost she would call in the frantic need to talk to me. To talk to me about them. And that's what I swam in when she pulled me into her pool of porcelain ghosts of men who I knew nothing about; I swam in their clinky, creepy aftermath. She was in pieces, and I was dancing between the delicacy of these easily shattered icons she erected in her memory of them.
Last night, when she called, I would not come.
Later last night, when she called, I would not come.
After midnight, when she called begging, I came.
I would not listen to her sorrows sung of the next in the line of lovers whose intentions were to merely spin her and tip her and roll her around in a waiting game to see if she would bounce or break when they let her go.
I would not polish her delicate edges, let seep her condensing grief on my hands or protect her with wrappings of paper and cotton.
By daybreak, she was begging to let me once again take what she wanted emptied from her center, so that she may be free to be burned again, filled by their vital fluids and steaming temptation.
By ten, I made my intentions clear. I was to be next in the line: to spin, to tip, to roll, to pour myself and watch her go.
By eleven, she relented.
I broke her at noon.
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When I right.
When I write, I feel as though someone has met me. Seen my life, extracting the smallest part of me, and turning it into a story. When I write, it takes me away, sets me back. It makes me think about things I shouldn't, telling me things about myself I never knew. Maybe I might not be me if I didn't write. Who I am is shown through my words, saying things that might never leave my mouth.
When I write, it takes me into a whole new world, one that I'd like to stay in if I could. Creation, pouring out of my soul as the pencil drops against the paper, sending me into a state of peace and serenity I seem to want to hide behind.
I don't usually g
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Letters
Write me letters.
i.
"Tell me your story," a shy smile accompanies the words, as he leans towards me, hands wrapped around my perpetually cold ones. "Please." It's eighty degrees centigrade, and yet I'm wearing my favourite sweatshirt, the one with the white strings that he he can't seem to stop playing with. His fingers inch up towards the laces again, and I gently push my hands back towards him, sighing as I frustratedly tell him for the umpenteenth time to stop it. I close my eyes and let out a breath, muscles loosening [but immediately tensing again]. He can feel it too, and squeezes my wrists gently, forcing me to release my clenched f
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Generous
There’s this pressure building
in my chest that I don’t know
what to do with so I cram mason
jars with cookies, craft mix
tapes full of Americana punk, leaf
through used bookstores, looking
for a taste you never savored, songs you never
heard, books you never read and maybe
I can give you that instead of my feelings.
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I posted this back in January under my other dA name, but my audience on that name is generally less open to prose. Those of you who have not read this, I'm looking forward to your reaction.
Comments, Feedback and Questions welcome
Word Count: 329
Comments, Feedback and Questions welcome
Word Count: 329
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I never went through this, but I knew many of my "nice friend" guys who did. Though, it's sad, because I've seen so often that people who are treated poorly or watch people treated poorly, often forget that feeling and act the same once they get into the driver's seat.
Nice read.
Nice read.