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past

tired feet
and the hop-scotch marks
of time

through 

binding fears
of the last lover
to wrong her

under

brilliant layers
of preservation applied
in mirrored morning tasks

into

the little girl
who wants to ask you
to hold her good-night



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Sinnomangirl Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awww this is so sweet. :)
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enigmaticsmile Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :)
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wildirishrose7 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This spoke to the little girl in me. :)
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enigmaticsmile Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well, that I am glad to hear :) That means I did my job as a writer. Thanks for the fave, too!
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wildirishrose7 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The pleasure was mine.
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Queen-Kitty Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013   Photographer
Simply beautiful, you have a way with words.
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enigmaticsmile Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's a wonderful compliment, :blush: Thank you.
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oracle-of-nonsense Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student Writer
This is very, very beautiful. And touching. And insightful.
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enigmaticsmile Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :blush:
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quickekid Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
Beautiful poem. Kudos.
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