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I don't think that the moon
wanted to be
the moon

imagine a hot rock
released to its own path
by a collision
explosion
or monumental
fission fusion of creation
taking pace
among the stars
free

only soon
a sun with planets
slowly pulls 
cajoles
this liberated
piece of travel-rounded
mass
into a steady orbit
of obligations

light the night
guide the ships
pull the tides
make us wonder
let the wolves howl

night after night
repetitive
circling

wondering
about its freedom

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~Sigma-Echo-Seven Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Pure brilliance. Every line, every notion.
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*enigmaticsmile Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you- what a wonderful comment. And thanks for the fave!
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*Hfeather53 Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Featured here: [link] :hug:
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*enigmaticsmile Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :) :blush:
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*Hfeather53 Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Always a pleasure (=
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~oracle-of-nonsense Oct 13, 2012  Student Writer
This is an interesting thought, and an original one. I really like it, and it sort of makes me sad for the moon
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*enigmaticsmile Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, you know me... always thinkin' about things...
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:iconwooltree:
I found this quite sad, but beautiful. Great piece :)
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*enigmaticsmile Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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`vespera Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh darling, this is such a cool piece!
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