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dwindletown night train
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excruciating
to dwindle unconvinced
seeping in minutes
towards
radioactive peaceful slumber
tragic-laced sweeteners
whipped in icing
frosting the filial pill
ushered down a throat
upon father fatality's
call to communion
all cry to this moment
release
possibility
somber
unknown
with every waking motion
on every single sunrise
all accomplishments
must be inked indelible
in the now
no blossom
flowers the same
after snowfall
inevitable track
non-stop master
we let the fear
wind us
to heavens too far
pray
and enjoy
the whistle
So, yes, I couldn't fall asleep tonight because I was thinking about death... and it's inevitability...
© 2012 - 2024 enigmaticsmile
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For me this was a very fascinating read. It's interesting and somehow it all creates disjointed images in my head. I can't explain what those images are since it has kind of left me speechless and I apologize for that but as soon as I can get it sorted I will message again 
Overall though, my thoughts of your poem are positive and I enjoyed reading it.
Overall though, my thoughts of your poem are positive and I enjoyed reading it.